UPSC Mains Essay Writing Prompt
Topic: Gender Equality - Problems and Perspectives
1. Introduction (50-70 words)
Hook: Start with a powerful quote or statistic (e.g., "According to WEF's 2023 report, at current progress, gender parity will take 131 years globally").
Context: Define gender equality as equal rights, responsibilities and opportunities regardless of gender.
Thesis: "While India has made progress in gender equality through constitutional measures, deep-rooted social norms continue to hinder true empowerment."
2. Body (4-5 Paragraphs)
Paragraph Structure:
- Idea: One key argument per paragraph (e.g., "Economic disparities persist in workforce participation")
- Support: Use data (e.g., "Female LFPR is just 24% vs 56% for men - PLFS 2022"), examples (e.g., "Anganwadi workers' contribution during pandemic"), or quotes ("Amartya Sen's 'missing women' theory")
- Transition: Link to next point (e.g., "Beyond economic barriers, political representation remains skewed...")
Suggested Frameworks:
- Historical → Current → Future: From ancient egalitarian societies to modern constitutional guarantees
- Sectoral Analysis: Education, Health, Employment, Political participation
- Problem-Solution: Identify challenges and government initiatives (Beti Bachao Beti Padhao, 33% Women's Reservation Bill)
3. Conclusion (50-70 words)
Summary: Recap progress made and challenges remaining in 2 lines.
Vision: "A gender-equal India would harness its full demographic potential, as envisioned in SDG 5."
Clincher: Use a constitutional ideal ("Justice - Social, Economic and Political" from Preamble) or quote ("The hands that rock the cradle rule the world" - Swami Vivekananda).
Example Application:
Hook: "When Savitribai Phule opened India's first girls' school in 1848, she planted the seed for gender equality that still grows today."
Body:
- Education: Improved female literacy (70.3% in 2021) but STEM gender gap persists
- Health: Declining sex ratio (929 females/1000 males) vs. maternal mortality improvement
- Economic: Gender pay gap (34% in formal sector) and unpaid care work burden
- Political: Panchayati Raj success (14 lakh women representatives) vs. Parliament stagnation (14.4% women MPs)
Conclusion: "As we build 'Nari Shakti' for New India, true equality will come when daughters are as celebrated as sons, in homes as much as in laws."
How to Use This Prompt:
- Copy this template structure for any UPSC essay topic
- Replace content with your specific arguments and examples
- Maintain balance - acknowledge progress while highlighting gaps
- Use recent data (NFHS, NCRB reports) for authenticity
- Practice writing within 1000-1200 words limit
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